much better!
i think the piano added alot to it! it has alot more character now. this is great! i really do like the main melody! thats the one thing i'm always trying to improve. so this is overall greatness. good job! ^_^
Sincerely,
ODDKUN
much better!
i think the piano added alot to it! it has alot more character now. this is great! i really do like the main melody! thats the one thing i'm always trying to improve. so this is overall greatness. good job! ^_^
Sincerely,
ODDKUN
it was good but....
it was good but it lacked character. i have listened to your other songs, and i think you could still add more to this one. i believe that the more noise the better, as long as the noise is beautiful! ^_^ you should add to the melody with another "instrument" or make a counter melody to go along with it.
p.s. please check out my song, it's my first so enjoy
sincerely,
ODDKUN
Age 35, Male
moocher
stalkers!!! T_T
Joined on 4/13/05